<p>Hello class of 2011,</p>
<p>First of all I'd like to say congrats to everyone here on getting accepted; it must feel nice!</p>
<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read my Why Penn essay and give me suggestions. It is certainly not an easy topic (imho) and I am not even sure I'm follow the prompt correctly. I would appreciate it greatly if anyone could give me suggestions. I sure hope I will have the opportunity to join you guys in the near future!</p>
<p>Thanks for your time</p>