<p>ok so i just finished my why penn essay, i'm not sure if its good or not and it probably needs some work</p>
<p>can someone take a look at it?</p>
<p>I will! But only if you read mine too (I'm about 3/4 done)</p>
<p>ok pm me ur essay when u want and i'll send mine over, anyone else?</p>
<p>ill read it, i already finished mine.</p>
<p>pm it, i can do it in the next 30 min.</p>
<p>Not applying, but am familiar with Penn, if you want another person to take a look. PM me.</p>
<p><a href="mailto:jwrappaport@gmail.com">jwrappaport@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>You can PM me if you want, I'm not applying till next year. Good luck!</p>
<p>You can pm me if you want to..</p>
<p>PM me. happy to help!
(i got in ED.)</p>