Any willing college essay readers?

<p>I'm applying EA to a few schools and I need to work on my essay before I can send in my application. I wrote my essay last spring for my English class, and I thought it was great at the time, but now I'm not so sure. I just read it and I'm afraid that it's too long and not good enough. If anyone's willing to read and critique my essay, please send me a private message!! This is kind of urgent because I really want to submit my application to these schools ASAP.</p>