Anybody care to give their opinion on my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi, I've edited my essay pretty thoroughly at this point and I'm concerned about whether or not the subject matter fits what most people define as a unique, strong college essay.</p>

<p>If anybody would be willing to read it and tell me what they think, I would greatly appreciate!</p>

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<p>sure pm me :)</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look :P</p>

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<p>Sure, just PM it over!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read and give you feedback.</p>

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<p>I’ll help! PM it over :)</p>

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<p>Sure, pm me?</p>

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<p>I’m an English major. Send it over and I’ll give you some feedback. PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and provide feedback. Just PM it to me! :)</p>

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<p>sure, sure</p>