Could someone critique my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Well, I've just finished my first draft of an essay and was wondering if anyone wanted to help me with it.</p>

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<p>pm it to me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>I’ll help! PM it over :)</p>

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<p>I’m an English major. Send it over and I’ll take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and provide feedback. Just PM it to me! :)</p>