Anybody want to critique my Stanford roommate essay

<p>I just finished writing my roommate essay. I basically was freewriting and finished the whole thing in 20 minutes - basically just spitting out what was in my mind.</p>

<p>It's waaaay over the word limit but I just want you guys to help take a look and let me know what you think of the style, content etc.</p>

<p>Let me know and I'll PM</p>

<p>Preferably not any 2014ers but I'll review you case by case. Thanks :)</p>

<p>i’m a 2014er but i already turned in all my stuff… so there’s no going back now haha. if you want I can take a look at yours… totally up to you.</p>

<p>same here…just PM me if u want to</p>

<p>I wrote everything. so I can critique it.</p>

<p>I WILL! pm me.
i applied last month, so i won’t steal your ideas :)</p>

<p>yeah, mine is already a done-deal–with the online sig and everything. so i’ll take a look at it if you want.</p>

<p>same here. pm me and i’ll read it</p>

<p>same here, I’ll read/revise it, just pm it over :)</p>

<p>same here. PM me.</p>

<p>i’ll read it. just submitted mine exactly an hour ago.</p>

<p>pm me already submitted.</p>