Anybody want to proofread my essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>it's a last second essay for princeton (the one where you choose a book quote and say how it applies to an experience in your life and blah blah blah). Anybody want to tell me what they think?</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it; you can pm me. I’m actually almost finished my CA right now (hopeless procrastinator) about a book/character that has affected me, so maybe we could trade? :)</p>

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<p>i have to email it to you because it says i cant pm before I’ve done 15 posts; just sent it</p>

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<p>okay nevermind ths is my 15th post so ill pm it</p>

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<p>You will get more replies and more helpful advice on the College Essays forum.</p>