Anyone want to read my essay and help out with a couple things?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I am having trouble coming up with a good beginning sentence and ending sentence for my essay, as well as a couple little things. If anyone could read my essay and provide some tips, that would be greatly appreciated. I will read and critique your essay as well if you would like.</p>

<p>PM me or post here.</p>

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<p>I will gladly read your essay and provide feedback and suggestions.</p>

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<p>Hit me up with a PM! I’ll critique it</p>

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<p>PM me I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>Me too! :)</p>