Anybody want to read what i have so far?

<p>Hi, i'm not done with my essay yet, but i would reallly like some feedback to see if i'm on the right track so far with my topic and first paragraphs. I'm in the process of writing another supporting paragraph, and i have yet to start my conclusion. </p>

<p>i'll pm it to anyone willing to read it! thanksss</p>

<p>I’ve already written my essay…I’ll take a look at yours if you want :)</p>