<p>I know that the people who frequent the "College Essays" page are often bogged with work, so I'm not asking for hard editing/criticism of my essays. Instead, would somebody be willing to read over my Stanford/Harvey Mudd essays, and tell me what I should try to do? </p>
<p>I don't need hard criticism/proofreading, I know I'm asking a lot of you by asking you to read over my essay (though criticism would be nice). I just want to know in what direction I should take each essay, based on what it already is. </p>
<p>PM me if you're willing to do this, I really do need help, the people who normally do this at my school are no longer helping for some reason...</p>