Anyone care to review my writing supplement?

<p>I'm really banking on my writing skills to get me in to these top schools as my GPA is less than stellar and my ACT is pretty low at a 30. Tell me if youre willing to review my supplement and I'll inbox you!</p>

<p>I’d be happy to help :)</p>

<p>Happy to read it if you’re still looking for feedback. My sister is home on winter break from Williams (Biology/English double major) and I can have her go over it too.</p>

<p>If you’re still looking for help, i’d be happy to help out!</p>

<p>You might not want to ask on this forum as a bunch of Williams prospects are applying, and they could very well steal your ideas. Your call though.</p>