Anyone interested in reading my essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Pomona College
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<p>Hey all!</p>

<p>I just wanted to thank everyone for being so helpful whenever I had a nagging question about admissions! You guys are super helpful and I sure hope I'd be lucky enough to join your school next year.</p>

<p>That being said, I promise this is one of my last annoying posts on the Pomona forum. But to all parents, alumni, and current students of Pomona, is there anyone who would please be willing to help me with my Personal Statement? :) If you are, please message me here and I'll PM it to you or something!</p>

<p>I wanted to write something quirky and funny, but that also signified a positive change in my life. I'm worried it's not concise enough and that it reveals something very bad about myself that will be unsightly.</p>

<p>I have asked my counselor, English teacher, and a bunch of friends to help and they are helpful for sure, but almost everyone agreed having some one with more intimate knowledge of the school would be better. :)</p>

<p>Thanks so much!!</p>

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<p>Thanks to the people who did PM me!! <3</p>

<p>Anyone else interested please? :] Interview went really well today and I think I’ll be applying ED II.</p>

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<p>Sure, send me it</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read. :)</p>

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<p>I will as well. :)</p>

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<p>I’d love to give it a read</p>

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<p>I would be happy to read it. I think quirky is good–shows wit and another dimension to you.</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to</p>