Anyone read my 2 college essays?

<p>I wrote 2 college essays. I don't know if they're any good. Can someone read them and critique them? Maybe give me suggestions...</p>

<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

<p>I can, PM me.</p>

<p>i will look at them... be sure to tell me the prompt.</p>

<p>Blairt-I have sent them to you a week ago and you haven't PMed me back. What's the deal?</p>

<p>pm it over.</p>

<p>i'll read it. pm it!</p>

<p>I can do, pm it.</p>

<p>i'll look at it, but please yahoo the doc to me at bhaircut</p>

<p>sure, I'll be happy to. pm me!</p>

<p>hi, either pm it to me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>(but do it soon, i have vacation plans in 4 days)</p>