<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>I was wondering if anyone would read my Why Penn essay. It is pretty unique and I think it does a great job of conveying my personality. I would love to get some feedback.</p>
<p>Thanks guys and GL with apps tonight!</p>
<p>Hey, I can read your essay. I’m in the process of editing mine, so maybe you could give me some feedback as well?</p>
<p>I can read. PM it over.</p>
<p>hmm i thought the deadline is over alrd?</p>