anyone that has seen successful personal statements willing to revise mine?

<p>Hi, I would really appreciate it is someone can revise my essay by Friday. If you can, just leave me your email address and ill send you it.</p>

<p>PS. I am leaning toward majoring in engineering; either CS, CE, or Bioinformatics.</p>

<p>Any info and/or possible job outlook for these majors is appreciated. If you are majoring in these majors, how hard is it/what are some required skills?</p>

<p>I am good at math and science, and I know how to build my own computer, but is there anything I should REALLY know before choosing that major, such as coding or circuitry.</p>

<p>Dear AC, </p>

<p>¥ou are supposed to do your own writing and revising. I think it unlikely that you'll find anyone here who will do it for you. I'm sure you can do your own work adequately.</p>

<p>I see many people post their essays or request others to read their essays to check for any problems so I thought I could do the same. I am not asking someone to write an essay for me, I just need an unbiased opinion on my essays that I have already written.</p>

<p>I originally posted my request on the College Admissions forum but someone pointed me to this forum because there are some trustworthy people here that will look over an essay for me.</p>

<p>Ah--when you asked that someone revise it for you, I read that to mean that you want more than a few comments. I beg your pardon.</p>