Need some people to read my common app essay (I will read yours if you want))

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys I hope some of you have time to read and critique my common app essay. I need to know if my purpose is focused and if it gets the point across. Thank you and if you need someone to read your essays I will be happy to help.</p>

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<p>bummmmmppppppp</p>

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<p>I will read it just send it over ill send mine :)</p>

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<p>same! send me yours and I’ll send you mine to read!</p>

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<p>:) I’ll read yours and i’ll send you mine!</p>

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<p>^I read all of your essays. anyone else want to read mine?</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>Send it to me and I’ll send mine (just for the sake of it, as I’ve already sent my application.)</p>

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<p>I can take a look. Just PM me :)</p>

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<p>Send it to me and can you also read mine?</p>

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<p>same here, send yours and i’ll send you mine. It’s only 500 words. quick read promise :)</p>

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<p>bump it up and pm me your essays. I will read them and make comments.</p>

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<p>pm me if you will. thanks.</p>

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<p>I will read it! Can you read mine as well?</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read :slight_smile: Then can you read mine too?</p>

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<p>^sent you mine. just send yours and i’ll read and edit it.</p>

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<p>bummppp it upppp</p>

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<p>bump i need more opinions</p>