Anyone wanna critique my USC short essay? 4 sentences!

<p>Can anyone help me with my short essay, send me a pm or post on here. Thanks in advance. I also have to do another one, so let me know if you would also be interested in reading the second one as well.</p>

<p>Its literally 4 sentences guys. I just need someone to help me brush up the sentences, and maybe swap out some words for better suited words.</p>

<p>i’ll give it a go! PM?</p>

<p>ill help you out, but is that all you plan on writing or is it just a start??</p>