Can someone critique my essay or Umich and USC?

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<p>I need an honest person who knows a lot about college essays. Post here and I'll PM you the essay. Thanks!</p>

<p>sure send it to me, i’m a harsh critic tho.</p>

<p>Feel free to send it to me. I will read and proofread.</p>

<p>I will if you’ll read mine! I’m obviously no expert, but I’m pretty good with grammar and knowing if things flow and sound good:)</p>

<p>Hit me up!</p>

<p>Pm me too. I’d like to have an idea too. Thanks :)</p>

<p>Pm’d some of you guys. Thanks!</p>

<p>Sure thing. I’ll read it</p>

<p>PM me, I want to read.</p>