Anyone wanna read an essay about living overseas?

<p>I'd love for someone to read and give suggestions for my essay about living in Argentina in 7th grade. It's for the Common App and Tulane and possibly a few other schools..I'd especially love help on which parts I could cut/shorten (it's a little less than 700 words and I'd like to get it down to the 500s without taking away from the quality). </p>

<p>Any help is greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>..and no 09ers, please. :)</p>

<p>would like to help out.
PM me</p>

<p>bumpppp anyone else?</p>

<p>I would love to)</p>

<p>hit me up and i'd love to give you some feedback from a fellow voyager</p>