<p>I'd love for someone to read and give suggestions for my essay about living in Argentina in 7th grade. It's for the Common App and Tulane and possibly a few other schools..I'd especially love help on which parts I could cut/shorten (it's a little less than 700 words and I'd like to get it down to the 500s without taking away from the quality). </p>
<p>Any help is greatly appreciated!</p>
<p>..and no 09ers, please. :)</p>