Anyone wanna read/critique my School newspaper article?

<p>This is my first time writing an article for my school newspaper. Anyone care to read and give opinions on it? I'll PM it to you if you're interested :)</p>

<p>What’s it about?</p>

<p>i replied you as a PM</p>

<p>PM me. I’ve had 2 years are so experience with newspaper writing.</p>

<p>I’d love to read it. :)</p>

<p>LOL! I just sent out a ginormous email with new rules for our second issue :P</p>