<p>its pretty unique and interesting. just let me know and i'll pm.</p>
<p>i would! im in the process of editing mine and just want to get an idea of others essay!</p>
<p>sorry but i’m mainly looking for people who could give me feedback. if you could give me a few strengths and weaknesses of my essay, i’ll send it to you.</p>
<p>I don’t think sending your essays to someone you don’t know is a good idea. I’m sure most people here are trustworthy, but why risk it? Don’t you have someone you know and trust who could look yours over?</p>
<p>Yeah you have a point. I’ll probably go ask my english teacher</p>
<p>Good idea!</p>
<p>noaveragegenius, I’d also suggest getting your parents to proofread your essays and asking them to give you their opinions on what needs to be improved etc. Good luck!</p>