Essay assistance please!

College Essays
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<p>I need a couple of advice/honest criticism about my essay. I already received feedback from An0maly(who was a huge help) but I'd like to see how others perceive my essay and what improvements I can do to make it stand out.</p>

<p>Fellow high school students may help, so I am putting a huge amount of trust in you to not just take the essay and use it as your own.</p>

<p>Other than that, i'd like to thank you folks beforehand just for taking the time to read this.</p>

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<p>sure ill edit and help</p>

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<p>Send it over, my friend.</p>

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<p>You should ask your english teacher or counselor to look at your essay. People on the internet might steal you ideas, or flat out plagiarize your essay.</p>