Anyone want to critique/harshly criticize my personal statement?! :)

College Essays
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<p>As a homeschooler, I'm required to provide a portfolio with all of my college applications. My personal statement is NOT the same thing as college application essays. It is simply the first thing one will see after looking at the Table of Contents for my portfolio.</p>

<p>Anyone (class year doesn't matter) want to glance through it for me? Please? I'd be willing to return the favor. Thanks.</p>

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<p>anyone?! :)</p>

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<p>sure PM it to me</p>

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<p>ill read it for you</p>

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<p>haha I'll rip it apart if you want, pm me I'll read it for you</p>

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<p>Some Ppl Call Me Mean.you'll Have 2 Pm The Essay 2 See.</p>

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<p>Criticism is my specialty. PM it over.</p>