Anyone want to edit my first essay?

College Essays
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<p>I just want to make sure I'm good to go, to submit my app at this school. I'm going to check up on anyone who wants to, and I won't let a high school student read it. I've had a couple people edit it. Also It's about my passion for politics, so it might sit better with leftist than others. </p>

<p>thanks</p>

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<p>LOL, some of the most helpful critiques I got for my essays last year were from my fellow high school applicants. (But I understand why you wouldn’t want to though :])</p>

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<p>I had a good friend of mine read it… Just not a high school student I don’t know</p>

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<p>I can read over it if you want.</p>

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<p>Great, I’ll PM it to you</p>

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<p>Did you get it?</p>

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<p>I got it the first time :]. I PMed you back —that was honestly a very long essay, and you do need to edit it a lot more :p.</p>