<p>Background: I plan on getting around the 2300's on my SAT and I'm taking them next month so any feedback would be appreciated. Also, if i could have replaced any words I used with better vocabulary let me know! Thanks in advance :D PS: suggestions for better examples would be helpful as well</p>
<p>Assignment: Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today?</p>
<pre><code> As the world continues to age, it becomes more and more rigid and less creative, in terms of thinking. However, this is a problem because the only way for the world to burgeon prosperity as every day passes, creative minds are needed. Creativity fuels change and innovation and in order for the world to advance prosperously at the same rate as it did in the past, is if more emphasis is placed on creativity for it is needed in the world more than ever to solve today's issues.
After the recession of 2007, America had been struggling to get back on its feet and recuperate to its blooming, curative self again. The unemployment rate this past July was somewhere in the ballpark of 6.2% and creative minds can help to mitigate the current financial crisis. Creativity helps to create new inventions that may not only benefit and sometimes expedite daily routines, but they would also stimulate and strengthen the economy. A healthy modicum of new inventions every month is enough to ensure the economic problems that exist in the US today are on the road to recovery. However, creativity is imperative for inventions.
Creativity is thinking outside the box: thinking abstractly. Today, in western Africa, the ignominious Ebola virus is an epidemic that has killed thousands of people in an astounding rate. To this day, there is no known cure. Unless, history is to be repeated once again (bubonic plague) scientists need to think more creatively as they continue researching. Essentially, science research is thinking outside of conventional thoughts or beliefs to test innovative hypothesis'; science would be nothing without the creativity that nests in the mind of scientists. We need them to be more creative then ever to put an end to this atrocity.
Unfortunately, as society advances, its beliefs on living and advancing further become rigid. However, creativity is imperative for the progression of society and is therefore needed more then ever in this world today.
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