Anyone want to read my common app essay

<p>I still need ideas for a solid conclusion so if you have ideas for that that would be great. the main colleges that i am applying to are nyu, georgetown, emory, uva, umich, and upenn. If you guys are applying to these colleges I am sorry but i cannot pm u my essay. But if you aren't feel free to critique me essay. </p>

<p>THANKS</p>

<p>my* essay
lol typo</p>

<p>Sure i'll take a look at it. PM me.</p>

<p>I'll take a look too. PM me!</p>

<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>i'd love to help. PM me.</p>

<p>haha .. just curious what you wrote...</p>

<p>perhaps able to suggest some ideas:)</p>

<p>I will look at it. </p>

<p>PM it too me. :)</p>

<p>I've got a lot of experience with these things (have sent 3 kids to the ivies) and I'd be happy to give it a whirl!</p>

<p>How do you know whether people are being honest when they claim that they aren't applying to a certain school?</p>

<p>I actually do like a background check on everyone and check when they are applying to colleges and what colleges they are applying to.</p>

<p>I would love to read it.
I'm applying to UT Austin and Rice.</p>