Please read my commonapp essay

<p>Would anybody be willing to read and critique my commonapp essay? I'd really appreciate the help.</p>

<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>

<p>I'm willing to read it too.</p>

<p>k send or pm</p>

<p>pm me it. im an 08er applied at UT Austin</p>

<p>bump-- hopefully some other people will look at it lol im bored right now and i want to see what people think</p>

<p>ok.. u can pm me.. ill have a llook</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it, PM me!</p>

<p>*bump Anyone else wanna read?</p>

<p>I'll read it! PM</p>

<p>ill read! PM
will provide constructive criticism :)</p>

<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>