<p>I am having trouble coming up with a good beginning sentence and ending sentence for my essay, as well as a couple little things. If anyone could read my essay and provide some tips, that would be greatly appreciated. I will read and critique your essay as well if you would like.</p>
<p>PM me or post here.</p>
<p>I can read it, although I’m better at giving advice on your essay holistically rather than just your intro/conclusion.</p>
<p>I can read it, if I haven’t already.</p>
<p>I will, if you still need some help.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it! Funny enough, I’ve come up with a strong beginning and closing for my essay, but no middle.</p>