Anyone want to read my essay?

<p>Hi. I am a senior trying to write a strong essay for the colleges that I am applying to. If you have a few minutes, can you look over my Common App essay? Thanks in advance! If you need someone to look over your essay, I would be glad to help :)</p>

<p>Yeah sure, where are you applying with this essay?</p>

<p>Thanks @sarrahhdaherr‌ I was thinking Fordham and I might write a new essay for the ivies I plan to apply to. Can I pm you?</p>

<p>Sounds good @GummyJenny‌ </p>