Anyone want to read my UC essay please? feedback appreciated!

<p>Hey, I wrote a first draft for the first UC essay prompt, the Academic Preparation one.</p>

<p>How have you taken advantage of the educational opportunities you have had to prepare for college?</p>

<p>If you are interested, plz PM me, and I will message it to you. </p>

<p>I greatly appreciate any feedback and suggestions, thank you!</p>

<p>so yeah so far only one person... :( I need help!</p>

<p>what did u write about on the academic prep</p>

<p>would u like me to send it to you so u could know? lol</p>

<p>bump </p>

<p>plz help.</p>

<p>sure why not</p>

<p>I'd love to. PM it to me and I'll try my best to see what I can do to help you out with feedback and such.</p>

<p>So if anyone wants to read and give feedback, plz leave a post here requesting a PM with the essay for me! thanx again!</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>thanks seth. I just sent it to u!</p>

<p>sure send it to me ill read it</p>

<p>k i'll send it to u rite now.</p>

<p>I'll read it, PM it over :)</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it if you want</p>

<p>I'll take a look too</p>