Read/Critique my UC essay #2 ???

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone would be so kind as to read & critique my UC essay 2. It's a bit personal, but I'd appreciate any feedback I can get. </p>

<p>Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>sure! I can take a look at your essay. I will give you some critiques too. I just finished mine too, wanna do an essay exchange? :)</p>

<p>I can read it =]</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>

<p>Sure, I would love to read over your essay and provide you some feedback. PM your essay to me! Thanks ;)</p>

<p>I will look it over, just pm me.</p>

<p>I'll look over it if you want (:</p>