Anyone willing to give feedback on my "Found Something You Weren't Looking For" essay

<p>So, I know that UChicago is known for having quirky essays, but is it okay to write one with a more serious tone? I mean mine isn't depressing or anything, the topic is just less lighthearted than most I've seen.</p>

<p>Mine was lighthearted about something serious (got in EA). As long as the tone isn’t boring then you’re fine.</p>

<p>Yep, it’s definitely fine. My “found something” essay had a serious tone to it, and I got in EA. My other essays, however, were lighthearted to balance it out.</p>