Anyone willing to give feedback on my "Found Something You Weren't Looking For" essay

<p>With all the hype about the big early admit rate and UChicago being so subjective in their decisions, I'm freaking out a bit about my essay.</p>

<p>I would be eternally grateful to anyone willing to read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it! I was accepted EA with the same extended essay prompt.</p>