Anyone willing to give my Common App essay a quick read?

College Essays
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<p>Just finished completely re-doing my Common App essay and would be extremely grateful if someone could give it a read for feedback. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll do it</p>

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<p>Ill do it</p>

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<p>I’ll do it, too :-)</p>

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<p>I can help </p>

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<p>sure.</p>

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<p>PM me…!</p>