Anyone willing to help with my essays?

College Essays
1

<p>Hello! </p>

<p>I have written two of my UC essays and would like some any feedback, revision, suggestions, etc. I'm having trouble with reducing the word count, since the max is 1000. I have about 20 words to cut out. </p>

<p>I'm open to all criticism... harsh or not! </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

2

<p>I’ll read it for you and you could read mine ?</p>

3

<p>I’d be glad to look at them.</p>

4

<p>I will edit and look them over for you. Just PM me if you’re still interested in having someone look them over :)</p>

5

<p>you can pm it over to me if you’d like</p>

6

<p>Can anyone revise mine
We could swap?</p>

7

<p>I’ll be happy to help. Feel free to PM me; I’ll try to get back to you asap.</p>