Getting a school-mandated jump start on college applications for next year and need to have a draft of my personal statement to show my teacher asap. I’ve been having complete writers block on this, but I managed to scrape together this very very rough draft and would really appreciate some feedback on it! I think it would fit under the prompt about facing a challenge, setback, or failure. I know it’s over the word count–I can fix that.
I would be so grateful to anyone willing to read what I’ve written and give me some suggestions! Especially on whether or not the topic is worth writing about or if I need to complete scrap the essay and come up with something else. Be brutal! (but helpful 
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Thank you so much!
If that is a link to the essay, you should remove it asap. If someone volunteers, you can PM them the essay. You don’t want your essay anywhere online.
Thanks for the heads up. I’ll remove it.
Many views but no responses…Desperate!
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Maybe you’re just at the wrong part in the college cycle and everyone is burned out. I may be able to look at it next week but this week I’m slammed at work.