Common App Essay =]

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hey guys! Ok so I've written up a rough draft of my common app essay, and was wondering if anyone wanted to read it. </p>

<p>I'm planning on applying to good schools (i.e., my name) so I would love it if you could be overly critical, rather than lenient when giving me feedback!</p>

<p>Anything would be much appreciated, and if you want to read my essay just shoot me a pm. Thanks!</p>

<p>Also a chancing might be nice but I don't feel like posting my stats, so if you want I'll pm them to you too. But that's optional lololol</p>

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<p>I will. Pm it to me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PM me :)</p>

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<p>Sure! I’ll read it… PM to me</p>

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<p>I would be glad to. Please PM it to me :slight_smile: I can also tell you some ideas that my daughter wrote in her essays.</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to help you. Feel free for PM me. :)</p>

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<p>Oops guys sorry for not responding for so long… I’m still working on them a bit do if you’re willing to wait a day or 2 I’ll send it out! Sorry!!! =&lt;/p>

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<p>I’ll help if you still need it :)</p>

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<p>I ll read it! PM me!!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’d like to see an example (dont worry I’m not copying :)) so could you pm it to me</p>

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<p>if still needed ill also read it. pm to me.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PLease PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll help you!</p>

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<p>I’d love to help!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help!</p>

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<p>watch out when sending it to new members. you don’t want have your essay stolen</p>