Anyone willing to read a rough personal statement?

Applying to College
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<p>Hi :)</p>

<p>I am writing my personal statement and have a rough draft ready and was wondering if anyone would be willing to read over it and give feedback on mechanical errors, consistency etc... I still have to work it over for the next two or three days, but I would really appreciate any help along the way.</p>

<p>If you can simply post here (or even PM me if you want), then I can either e-mail or PM it to you, your preference. I prefer that people with 100+ posts respond, although I'm flexible ;)</p>

<p>Again, thanks for any help.</p>

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<p>Anyone? :) January 1st is fast approaching...</p>

<p>I promise it'll be interesting—food, traveling, adventure, mopeds, and even lawn bowling!</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>