Would someone be willing to read my "personal statement"?

College Essays
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<p>Hello!</p>

<p>I am aplying to some less-than-competitive schools (think 1100 average SAT) and I was hoping I could get someone to look over my personal statement. I just want to get an outside opinion since it is so hard to judge my own work.</p>

<p>Please PM me (or let me pm you) for it because it does have some names and such that I would rather not post on the internet.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>-Corey</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look! Send me an email with the essay attached. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>Thanks! Email sent! Anyone else want to take a look?</p>