Anyone willing to read/criticize my UC prompt 1 please?

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys! I am currently working on UC prompts and just finished my very first draft for prompt 1 and working on prompt 2 (I know it's late but I'll try ma best to finish off them), is anyone willing to give me some constructive critique/ suggestion? My essays may sound stupid or weird to you, and crammed with heaps of grammar mistakes, but I just want some advice :) I guess I can PM you through the CC iPhone app even though I don't have enough posts, I tried before! Thanks in advance x</p>

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<p>Anyone ? :)))</p>

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<p>I’ll look it over.</p>

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<p>Hi everyone! I just joined and I’m not sure how to make my own thread so can someone please read my UC prompts as well? Any criticism would be much appreciated!!</p>

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<p>Go here:</p>

<p>[College</a> Essays - College Confidential](<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/]College”>College Essays - College Confidential Forums)</p>

<p>and click the New Thread button.</p>

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<p>I can read over then if you’d like</p>

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<p>I can read</p>