Anyone willing to read my common app essay?

I am pretty clueless as far as writing essays goes, so just remember that if you decide to help me XD I chose the topic that talked about failure: “The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success. Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?” Thanks!

I’ll read it! PM me.

I’ll take a look

Sure XD