Anyone willing to read my Common App (prompt 1) essay for film school?

The prompt is - “1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.”

I’m applying to film schools, so the essay is about my love for filmmaking and how it’s one of the biggest parts of my life.

If anyone wants to review it, I’d really appreciate it!