Anyone willing to read my common app short answer?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Is there anyone who can give me some feedback on my common app short answer? I'm not really sure if I'm approaching it the right way.</p>

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<p>sure!
10char</p>

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<p>I sent it to you in a private message. Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Bump…</p>

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<p>Bump…</p>