<p>Yeah, I've asked the inevitable.</p>
<p>I'm not really interested in more structural/grammatical critique. It's moreso if the aim/goal of my essay will be lauded by the application reader or laughed at and spin on.</p>
<p>Merci beaucoup</p>
<p>PS: It would also be helpful for someone who is totally dense/unknowledgable on literature read it too. Not to criticize you guys =) but to see if it makes sense.</p>