Anyone willing to read my pretty dramatic essay?

College Essays
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<p>Tear it to pieces, tell me I'm the worst writer you've ever encountered, I don't care. Just be brutally honest.</p>

<p>Also, if you would be so kind as to read it, maybe answer these for me in your feedback?</p>

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<li><p>is it too dramatic? If so, does the dramatization of the whole situation (even though I don't feel I was being overtly dramatic) take away from the essay as a whole?</p></li>
<li><p>is it unified? I feel like a lot of my thoughts were all over the place, but I've been really contemplative the past couple days and I banged this sucker out in about an hour (which I understand is not much time at all compared to what I should spend on it), but in the end I feel like I tied it up well.</p></li>
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<p>I feel it accurately reflects my voice and overall worldview in the context of a specific tragedy I was apart of. Anyway, anyone willing to read it?</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>i pm’d it to you. Thanks! and as a note, I’m responding to the common app essay prompt about a story so central to your character.</p>

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<p>I want to read it :slight_smile: I will be honest; I’m usually hard to impress.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i will read it. im writing fir that prompt.too</p>

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<p>I’ll read, if you’d like comments/edits!</p>

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<p>Oooh, drama. Let me take a shot at it.</p>

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<p>Sure. I just submitted my sob story for questbridge last Friday.</p>

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<p>I’ll PM them to you guys! Thanks!</p>

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<p>ill read it, PM me</p>

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<p>Maybe it’s dramatic because IT NEEDS to be dramatic. Life could be brutal to some, so don’t judge yourself too harshly. PM it if you please. I’ve had a pretty dramatic existence myself.</p>

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<p>I would love to look at it!</p>