<p>I'm really just looking for any comments, good or bad. I'm really at a stand still right now about what edits to make, maybe changing some of it, remove big chunks, or if I should just throw the whole thing out and start over.</p>
<p>Thanks in Advance :)</p>
<p>i will read it.</p>
<p>PM me if you want me to read it.</p>
<p>Sure send it. I'm 09 but not applying to Princeton.</p>
<p>I'll help. Already applied</p>
<p>sure send it over</p>
<p>Send it over!!</p>
<p>sure, not applying to princeton. pm me.</p>
<p>not applying to princeton anymore because i don't have three subject tests!
send it over if you still neeed</p>
<p>not applying to princeton so you can send it my way if you like. i read a princeton admit's essay already</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>THANKS SO MUCH!! I'm PMing everyone right now :)</p>
<p>I'll read it. Need something to do >:O</p>
<p>not applying to Princeton. Pm me.</p>
<p>okay it won't let me private message u back.. so i'm just going to say it over here.. good essay, no spelling errors or grammer errors. You answered the question in a well thought manner. You seem to be answering questions asked yourself and that's okay because you get to the point. Compared to the other Princeton essays i've read this one is not the strongest but then again i don't if they took it to their teacher and made her edit the whole thing. In all, hit that big gray button on college app site</p>
<p>I'm not applying to Princeton either. Send it on over! :)</p>
<p>id love to if you want :)
pm it over !</p>
<p>I can read it, I'm not applying to Princeton :)</p>
<p>i'll read :] send it over</p>
<p>Thanks to everyone who replied, I've PMed you
And thanks for the response IVYBound, again, much appreciated :)
oh, and GOOD LUCK!!</p>