appeal letter someone help!!

Applying to College
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<p>Ok so i know its ridiculously early being that I found out i was rejected from Berkeley like an hour ago, but i wrote out my appeal letter and I was wondering if someone could help me read it and see whether it seems like a strong essay or not. Please PM me for the essay. Thanks!! And congrats to everyone else who got in.</p>

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<p>do you have any noteworthy circumstantial changes since you last applied?</p>

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<p>I'll be more than happy to read it. PM it over to me</p>

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<p>.............</p>

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<p>it has some, well i'm not sure if it is considered "noteworthy"</p>

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<p>pm'd to rem</p>

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<p>I'll help you out too - send it my way if you want another opinion</p>

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<p>yea i'm willing to help out too.</p>

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<p>pm'd everyone, thanks!</p>

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<p>if you want another one....ill read it</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to help out.
pm it to me</p>

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<p>same. pm it to me.</p>

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<p>I can help out too if you want.
I'm appealing to UCLA.... :/</p>

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<p>i'll read it, if you'd like me to...</p>

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<p>I"ll take a peak.</p>

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<p>go ahead and send it. I'll give you whatever tips I have!</p>

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<p>I'll read it. (:</p>

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<p>im curious about appeal letters too!</p>

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<p>Me too. Send my way.</p>

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<p>I could give a looksee :] PM on over.</p>