@tigerrocks13 thanks for the feedback…
this is what i have
HONORS
1st place in B.E.S.T Robotics in TN
Grade level10, 11
recognition: State/Regional 1st place in B.E.S.T Robotics South Eastern USA
Grade level10
recognition: National 2nd place in B.E.S.T Robotics South Eastern USA
Grade level11
recognition:State/Regional Top 10 APSU Math Competition for Algebra 2
Grade level:9
recognition:State/Regional Top 10 APSU Math Competition for Trigonometry
Grade level10
recognition: State/Regional
ACTIVITIES Activity type*Music: Instrumental
MAJOR ORCHESTRA IN TN (not naming for reasons)
2nd violin principal and ensured tonal precision for entire section of 2nd violins
Participation grade levels*9, 10, 12
Hours spent per week*4
Weeks spent per year*36
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeMusic: Instrumental
ANOTHER MAJOR ORCHESTRA IN TN (not naming for reasons.)
Concert Master and ensured tonal precision for entire orchestra and assisted the conductor everytime in the assembling of the entire orchestra
Participation grade levels*11
Hours spent per week*4
Weeks spent per year*36
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeRobotics
MH Robotics Team
assisted in the construction and design of a robot that must accomplish certain tasks.
Participation grade levels*10, 11
Hours spent per week*5
Weeks spent per year*25
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeReligious
1st violin during First Baptist Church service
Every Wednesday and Sunday played for the Church and Service in front of hundreds of people.
Participation grade levels*10, 11, 12
Hours spent per week*7
Weeks spent per year*52
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeWork (Paid)
*Grill Operator at Waffle House/Pie 5
Communication skills with many of the customers, time management, and leadership roles
Participation grade levels*10, 11, 12
Timing of participation*All year
Hours spent per week*20
Weeks spent per year*52
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeMusic: Instrumental
Position/Leadership description and organization name, if applicable*Violin Tutoring
Teaching three students to become accepted into one of them most highly selective musical ensembles in Tennessee.
Participation grade levels*10, 11, 12
Timing of participation*All year
Hours spent per week*4
Weeks spent per year*52
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeAthletics: Club
Activity name*Track and field
Runner for ___ high school
Everyday after school, the runners of the _______ high schoolTrack Team will run in preparation for track meets
Participation grade levels*11, 12
Hours spent per week*6
Weeks spent per year*36
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeAcademic
Beta Club ; Officer
Organized volunteer hours for teacher and did many errands to make teacher’s job easier.
Participation grade levels*11, 12
Timing of participation*During school year
Hours spent per week*5
Weeks spent per year*36
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeAcademic
National Honor Society
Volunteered at many different locations including at a National Historic Landmark and at Walmart during winter holidays for underprivileged children.
Participation grade levels*10, 11, 12
Timing of participation*During school year
Hours spent per week*4
Weeks spent per year*36
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.Yes Activity typeOther Club/Activity
Chess Club Officer ; _____ high school
taught many students on how to improve chess strategies.
Participation grade levels*10, 11, 12
Timing of participation*During school year
Hours spent per week*2
Weeks spent per year*36
I intend to participate in a similar activity in college.*Yes