Applying Tuesday- read over my supplemental (250 words)?

College Essays
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<p>I would really appreciate any advice/critiques you could give me on my supplemental essay, it has 250 words max so shouldn't take up much of your time. The more comments, the merrier, as I'm applying this Tuesday. I will pm you with the question and essay. I really do appreciate anyone who is willing to take the time to read it. Thank you!</p>

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<p>I am afraid my supplemental sounds too much like I’m “undecided” so any feedback on that would be appreciated as well! I can elaborate further in the pm. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>i will read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it !!</p>

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<p>Would love a couple more people to read it. I really appreciate all the detailed critiques I’ve received so far!</p>

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<p>I can read it for u</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you</p>