1st: Volleyball captain - leadership
2nd: My passion about the science in Humans - academic subject
3rd: Volunteering in a hospital to help patients - making my community a better place
4th: Showing that I am a tenacious person: example was my difficult process of getting an opportunity to shadow a doctor - how I stand out
Do you think UCs will be like “geez this student only talks about doctor or science stuff in her personal essays besides the 1st one”?
Should I consider changing at least one topic? 